Description review

Bus Policy Manager

Scottish Government · Glasgow, United Kingdom · back to the listing

HR standards

26/100

poor

Title ↔ description

77/100

solid

Reads as

Unclear

no confident match

What the listing never says

  • No section describes what the person would actually do. Scope clarity
  • No pay range published. Candidates cannot tell whether applying is worth their time. Pay transparency
  • No location or timezone policy stated, so a candidate cannot tell where they may work from. Scope clarity

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Bus policy is a high profile area that has been a priority of successive Governments. Bus plays a vital role in delivering an affordable and accessible public transport network in Scotland, as 73% of all journeys are made by bus. In addition to the existing concessionary travel schemes, the programme for government includes commitments for a nationwide £2 bus fare cap and better buses legislation to be delivered by the end of this parliament.…